Saturday, June 8, 2013

Original Prompt 2, Week 5



“She makes birds dip and cluster in a flame/ tree, heavy with bushels of orange blossoms,/ makes the green spikes of yucca, its white/ bell torches, the fallen petals of pink,/ fuchsia and white bougainvillea, dried to paper.”
—Tina Barr, “On the Loom”

Daniela, our tour guide, meets us at the top of Montelucco, chasing her tiny daughter, Mathilde, who is not chasing anything, not the pigeons like many children do here, on the paved slate tiles of the upper city, or even the feral cats who bend, mostly, under any hand. We have just ascended the gravel, found the fountain, had a cigarette. She leads us to the hovel of a monastery, St. Francis’s. With pink on the apples of her cheeks, she pins the air, rends it, and asks us to press an eye, too see through time to the ugly little man with the burlap bruising his skin, who needed to be alone so much that he climbed this mountain with no water and punctured the earth and God’s mouth was on the other side, flowing clear and sweet. Mathilde wiggles in her arms, palms her mother’s gray. We enter and everything is brown and flat, the tiny rooms like five cells in a beehive where a summer with no rain has desiccated the honey. The entrances to each room are so low, only Mathilde can fit, and she tries, before Daniela swings her up again, not high, not to Heaven, the roof is so low, only to her arms again, strong and tan. Daniela explains us the mystery, that Francis and his monks would have to bow in submission to God every time they passed through their rooms.

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